PINK my presentation evaluation

P!NK

I would say my presentation on P!NK is good because it shows the valid information and cuts out all the rubbish, i would say its written in good english and it shows good length. The background of the powerpoint is relative because its pink just like the girl band. We didn't include pictures because rather than making it look nice we focused on putting the right information in but i think that if we included one or two pictures it would have helped our grades .In my presentation i include basic understanding and i explain about the video, i think i could of done better by:

-WWW
-good background colour
-included good information
-good grammar and punctuation.

-EBI
-more pictures
-wrote more
-spent more time on looks.